Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Everybody knows that tourism sector is a quite valuable whole world and every country works for taking advantage from tourism sector. And also, all countries work on their touristic place for touristic attraction and in certain period of the year they make regulations. Countries give importance it because if looked from two main perspectives, economic and cultural advantages are seen about tourism sector. Because of this reason, international tourism do not cause cultural tension, unlike it bring global thinking shape and understanding between people in a country.
To start with, tourism sector is very profitable because tourists can bring exchange to countries. Therefore, both tourist and domestic people can benefit economically. Moreover, some tourists, who are businessman, can attempt to trade with domestic people or government. In addition, government and domestic people can work together for it. Thus, this possibilities can reveal state’s economy. Hence, if there are these profitable economic tools in tourism, we can see positive side of international tourism for people who have different culture.
Secondly, cultural differences create cultural richness, so domestic people can obtain global thinking shape and they can learn be understanding. And also, tourists can expand the domestic people’ horizon. For example, tourist can give information about own country’s food, so domestic people can establish restaurant which relate to different culture’s food. Thus, domestic people see advantageous side of the tourism.
Finally, we can realize written above, while there are many positive approach about cultural richness and economic advantages, we can not mention the negative side of the international tourism about tension which is created by different cultures. Governments is aware of tourism’s advantages, because of this all countries invest to tourism sector in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83392226148 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01486948312 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.302478386 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217729986719 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850526105909 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712044034501 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153655605755 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508819835454 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.