In the modern era, tourism became one of the most important economic sectors in the world. However, it can lead to conflicts between people who come from different cultures rather than creating a friendly atmosphere. This essay will delve both sides of this view before drawing a reasonable conclusion. In my opinion, tourism creates serious conflicts, such as economic competition instead of a beneficial communication.
Admittedly, after decades of speculation, people now have fairly accurate information concerning drawbacks of tourism industry. The main disadvantage of this is that it creates economic competition between both the governments and different countries’ citizens. A good illustration of this is that Greece and Turkey were wanting a coastal line in order to improve their tourism industry, which turn leads to a war between these countries. Secondly, toursits and local people cannot understand each other owing to language barrier. The result of this is that some misunderstandings might occur, and this situation might be perilous for communication of different citizens. Thus, tourism have detrimental effects on not only the governments but also citizens, therefore, the governments ought to be prudent concerning these effects.
Despite these arguments, benefits of tourism industry, such as cultural interchange should not be underestimated. The primary advantage of tourism is that people can easily make new foreign friends who come from another section of the world thanks to tourism. According to a report published by the New York Times, people who live in the Middle East try to introduce their traditions to foreign tourists in order to vanish their negative images through tourism. For instance, Syrian refugees gave leaflets, which concerning their civil war, to foreign abroads. Furthermore, if racist people travelled to beyond of borders, they would introduce other different cultures. Hence, even though a number of negative aspects of tourism, it has also a variety of benefits.
In conclusion, the decision as to whether tourism industry creates tension rather than communication must be taken in the context of the entire society. However, my personal view is that it can cause more serious conflicts than understanding different cultures.
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also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61206896552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02746489079 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1232119324 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299490523102 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892198182236 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048682352101 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190758417986 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352240349546 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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