Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Due to reduction in the air fares which provide huge opportunities to humans for commuting in the various regions as a tourist. However, the complications is emerging into people related to several cultures by tourism and I strongly accord with this perception because it badly affect local cultures, disrespect of religion places, attract to local youngsters on modern culture, never understanding between different cultures as well.
There are multifarious factors to support this notion and an initial is that it is reality that today tourism is a great source of income for the globe. In contrast, it is creating continuously lots of issues in the masses who are belonging to diverse cultures and traditions than understanding . According to this, the reason is that visitors who come into host nations have never vastly knowledge about each other’s cultures. As a result, sometimes they do few mistakes which hurt badly to host countries’s cultures which show there disrespect about these. For example, some foreign people go into Hindu and Sikh temples within western clothes such as never covering their heads, do not take out their shoes and etcetera who is not liked by local natives. Due to these, host citizens deem that this is disrespectful for their religious places and it develop a vast sense of tension between both.
Furthermore, the another concerning area is that local young adults have often influence to see the culture and dressing styles of commuters. In addition to this young people start to follow western cultures and adopting western dressing methods as well as going to far away from their own cultures. Moving further, this not only creates tension but also hate feelings for tourists in local communities. Moreover, majority of visitors never sometimes paying respect to historical places. For instance, a few numbers of tourists throw a litter on those places which directly attacks their enhancements. Last but not least, a drastic understanding can not find in the humans who are from various cultures the reasons are that staying 5 to 6 weeks in tourism regions are never enough periods to gain huge percentage of knowledge about local cultures, rituals, traditions as well. In other words, lack of information about tourism countries cultures lead to so many hurdles for all the world.
In conclusion, although, air-travelling make it convenient for masses to cover longer distance within short periods. According to this, tourism is giving a large proportion of wealth to the world and upgrading the economy conditions of tourism nations. Likewise, it lead to so many problems between several cultures as compared with understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28671328671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83776205062 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6769326213 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7222222222 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177097808319 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544329970647 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438317310779 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115596222157 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00767415277726 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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