Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that humans beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people have different views on the issue whether animal species extinction should be solved or not. While it could be argued that human welfare should be the priority, I would maintain that urgent actions need to be taken to prevent further loss of endangered animals.
On the one hand, those who have social conscience would claim that how important it is to bring about major socio-economic changes to benefit the mass of humanity. Obviously, famine, poverty and natural disasters are shown on TV every day, which are the still the suffering of large number of citizens. Also, the need to build an egalitarian society where natural resources are shared and wars have taken place regularly, need to be pursued vigorously. At the same time, those people believe that the extinction of some animals is just a natural process such as the disappearance of dinosaurs. Huge allocation of resources should be used for the improvement of people’s living conditions.
On the other hand, I agree with those in green movement who insist that the protection of human and animal survival could go hand in hand. First, the necessity of protecting animals could be seen in ecological aspect. A healthy ecology relies heavily on animal as their foundation. When any animal species disappear, it will be the sign that our ecological system is slowly falling apart. Moreover, natural habitats ensure the survival of animals, while many scientist claims that these habitats are also vital for human survival. For example, Rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide, and stabilize the Earth’s climate. By protection of animal species and their habitats, we can maintain natural balance of our planet. Also, many species of animals also play an indispensable role in agriculture. For example, bees are common species, but they are the main pollinator, which is essential for grain yield and the reproduction of plants.
In conclusion, although both views have some validity, I believe that governments and international organization need to take steps to stop animal extinction.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29129129129 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8206144323 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2525154697 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218408986778 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685324640356 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661127300909 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140998967669 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393952781348 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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