Nowadays, many buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms. Why is it so? What do you think is it a positive or negative effect?
In a modern era, the introduction of the separate rooms is more and more building such as offices like banks and classrooms in schools are using open source design. I firmly believe that this is a positive development.
To begin with, on the positive side, the majority of institutions are using partition because it makes easy for the people to work or study together at the same place. For example, in the past if citizens needs a help then they had to go in the other room instead of the same room. Nowadays, they are in the same room or class but many institutions created partition . Nevertheless , it saved time for the citizens who want aid.
Secondly, in today's era, the majority of schools institutions has made large big classes instead of separating them into the divisions. To illustrate, in the ancient time, fewer people go to their friend's class room to meet. So, the government decided to create one huge class for school students.
Every garden has weed, so there is also a negative effect of creating one room instead of separate. Firstly, it created disturbance to other people if a person working in the bank and get a phone call and he starts talking in the room then the other co workers and customers working in the same organisation will get distract. By this, it will create the problem for others. So, it can create negative impact.
In conclusion, studying or working on a one place has more advantage such as helping others. It has also downside but not more than positive side. So, in my view, open space design will help people in upcoming future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71223021583 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56339021371 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6814500089 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19027533241 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646580115292 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594575829438 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11228312106 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054062481313 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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