Nowadays many families have both parent working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others thibk that child care centre provide the best care. Discuss both views and your opinion.
In this high tech er, working of both parents have essential to fulfill the towering desire. One school of thought is that, grandparents play a phenomenal role to care of their children and provide knowledge them. However, plenty of people argue that view and they believe child care hubs is better source of care a child. Here, I will examine both views in futher paragraph with my perception.
To embark upon, million of masses assert that, nurish hubs play a fruitful role to uplift the standard of a children. Firstly, in current days both parents are working so that they send their small baby to these centre. Similarly, parents spend surplus money to enroll them in these hubs. For instance, the members of these care centre take care because of only on money. The availability of these centre in any city play a worthwhile role because the parents of the children have no tension of their baby because they provide so many facilities and food there. Additional to it, they also aware from technology to the children that is good opportunity for them and learn extra ordinary things.
Shifting attention to the old parents tandance towards their children. Firstly grandparents have numerous knowledge and experience of their life and they are the back bone of the nation. With the help of nourishment to their children is lucrative because senior parents guide them in right way and awaring morel values. Secondly, older parents are also conscious them what is wrong and right in their life. the presence of elder parents at home is worthwhile for children because they can make not only discipline them but also improve their decisions making skill.
To sum up, both views have own importance but in my opinion grandparents play a worthwhile role because they provide all the information while in child care hubs some time they indulge in bad activities.
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Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...with my perception. To embark upon, million of masses assert that, nurish hubs play...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...fruitful role to uplift the standard of a children. Firstly, in current days both parents ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... what is wrong and right in their life. the presence of elder parents at home is wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49007098588 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1703012498 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331413344046 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112054793283 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637946942541 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219220701104 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618389072417 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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