Some people prefer to watch live performances from there home on a t.v or online other prefer to be at present the event and experience it. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.
Electronic media play a vital role to develop the society and the onus of edification of citizen lies on the shoulder on the media. Most masses select to watch live concerts though their home on LED screen or online others choose to be at present the event and experience it. Here, I would examine both views in upcoming paragraph before reaching conclusion and my opinion also.
There are multifarious points to shore up why people prefer to live performance from their home on t.v or online . First and foremost, these days people are busy in their work or study and they do not have enough time to watch live concert that’s why they choose on a t.v or online from their home. Moreover, most of human believe that live concert are not only wastage of money but also time. With the help of watching live performance at their home they do multitask with it and they spent adequate time with their living family.
On the other side, few person deem that live concert is good way as compare to via t.v pr online. Firstly, with the help of live execution they meet with their favourite celebrities and capture picture with him or her. Addition to it, people enhance new things with the help of live activities and their imagination power will increase via live performance. Secondly, nowadays fans are much crazy about their willing celebrities so they support cheer and admire them at any cost.
From my prospective, both ways are very significant for everyone because everyone manage their time in all the activities and work while is the taste of person how he or she choose to watch it.
To recapitulate, sometime people do not have much money to spend on it while who are the crazy about their celebrity he or she do not think about money or time.
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Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
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smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ormance from their home on t.v or online . First and foremost, these days people a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'few people', 'few persons'.
Suggestion: few people; few persons
...ir living family. On the other side, few person deem that live concert is good way as c...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
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Suggestion: does
...e crazy about their celebrity he or she do not think about money or time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69131832797 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39395185963 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3121824085 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270851560082 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102046900553 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983133764296 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13552704317 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802905853768 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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