Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Millions of humans deem that a car is the supreme pathway to travel in one place to another place. However one school of thought is that, the most effective method in developing and improving health and stamina is considered to be ride by bicycle. Before farming any firm opinion both side will be discuss in further paragraph.

To begin with, in current days, plenty of masses spend huge amount of money to purchase cars because of its facilities such as comfortablity entertainment source and to save the time. For example, nowadays people work in those organisation which are far away from their home. Similarly, car play a fruitful role to reach their destination. Apart from that, during traveling anyone can play plethora of activities in the car namely, listen to music and news, eat something and gossiping etectra. To justify, car is the luxurious invention in the society to save precious time.

Shifting attention to the ride of bicycle graciousness not only for humans but also environment. Firstly, bicycle is worthwhile research in the society as compared to other modes of travel this is because of its comfort for people to stay fit and fiddle. For instance, if a person cover their path with the help of bicycle that is very helpful for their body parts because on that time most of the parts move to ride it. Addition to it, the regular use of bicycle in any place of the world is worthwhile for atmosphere because that is ecological mode of travel.

To recapitulate, both vehicle play a phenomenal role for everyone but the regular use of car will become a threat in future.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...na is considered to be ride by bicycle. Before farming any firm opinion both side will...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organisation' or 'those organisations'?
Suggestion: this organisation; those organisations
...e. For example, nowadays people work in those organisation which are far away from their home. Sim...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...regular use of car will become a threat in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82909090909 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63565883996 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.339478925 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134721162426 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492589780372 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304086840282 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765735696592 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114113748643 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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