Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by MEHTA on Fri, 03/16/2018 - 13:30

Handwriting plays a prominent role in all the organization. Writing is that source everyone can understand what someone wrote. One school of thought that, in our new generation it is useless to teach juvenile about the tips of good handwriting. I discord with the statement . Here, I would examine the views before reaching conclusion.

There are multifarious points ti shore up its discord. First and foremost, there are plethora of schools which encourage to pupils to enhance their handwriting skills. Moreover, Better tips can be provided by schools for improving their skills addition to it, tutors are giving tips from their kinder classes because on that age teachers mold any shape of the children writing structure. Handwriting is also helpful to improve their speaking skill due to this, they write any essay or something very relexation and neat and clear than they always remeber that thing that in any time they can see and understand.

Moving further, In all schools most of exams are held in others schools and the examiners is also different and that examiners do not know about the student and only the behalf of the writing and material they gives good grade. Secondly, handwriting also boost their confidence level because teachers also show the particular person name whose writing is fabulous and who write in well manner.

To recapitulate, handwriting skills always boost children score in his report and level of confident . Moreover , in the modern age they know about all the tips than easily tackle all the situation.

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Average: 7.7 (32 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...andwriting. I discord with the statement . Here, I would examine the views before ...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the exams') or simply say ''most exams''.
Suggestion: most of the exams; most exams
...tand. Moving further, In all schools most of exams are held in others schools and the exam...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...behalf of the writing and material they gives good grade. Secondly, handwriting also ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ore in his report and level of confident . Moreover , in the modern age they know ...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...report and level of confident . Moreover , in the modern age they know about all t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12648221344 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6167297874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5878429475 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115546930359 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386314815494 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045706291224 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796112019085 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417532460154 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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