For the best future of the children both parents are indulged in working. They keep their children with their family members, because they believe that grandparents can take care of their children very well. However, critics reckon that kids received best care from childcare centre rather than others. This essay will discuss both these statements. I personally believe that, either grandparents or other family members should take care of their kids.
On the one hand, if people are success in their life or they achieve their goal then it is only because of their "family members" , as they always support their children and help them to rid out from their conundrums. Elder member of family: grandparents, keep in-touch the children with their culture and traditional values as well and also taught moral and ethical values to them. Which results to make the best member of the society. No one teach these values without family members. That's why, upbringing of children should be by their family members.
On the flip side, with the advancement in nation number of centres are opened in town for the betterment of the dwellers.similarly, children care centre also established which provide the optimum care to the kids than their families. Over there, Central staff provide best facilities to the children.Which assist to make kid more creative and make them multi-talented in their early ages, either in art activity or in academic theory.
In conclusion, for the upbringing of children family care is optimum than the other one:centres, because they give moral and ethical values to children,whereas child care centre provide only theoretical knowledge to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'receive the best'.
Suggestion: receive the best
.... However, critics reckon that kids can receive best care from childcare centre rather than ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...bers should take care of their kids. on the one hand, if people are success in ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ause of their 'family members' , as they always sport their children and...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Elder
... them to rid out from their conundrums. elder member of family like grandparents keep...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... culture and traditional values as well and and also taught moral and ethical values to...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aught moral and ethical values to them. Which system make the best member of the soci...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ch these values without family members. Thats why, upbringing of children should be b...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the kids than their family. Over there, Central staff provide best facilities to...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...heir family. Over there, Central staff provide best facilities to the children. Which assis...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e moral and ethical values to children. Whereas, child care centre provide only theoret...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61625314301 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.6025573591 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355597257403 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121166091993 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735036955492 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233694393106 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10416360999 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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