For the best future of children both parents are indulged to work. They keep their children with their family members, because they believe that grandparents can take care of their children very well. However, critics reckon that they received best care from childcare centre rather than others. This essay will discuss both these statements. I personally believe that, either grandparents or other family members should take care of their kids.
On the one hand, if people are success in their life or they achieved their goal then it is only because of their family members, as families always support their children and help them to rid out from their problems.Elder member of family: grandparents, keep in-touch the children with their culture and traditional values. Which assist them to make the best member of the society. That's why, upbringing of children should be taken by their family members.
On the flip side, with the advancement in nations number of Centres are opened in town for the betterment of the dwellers.similarly, childcare centre also established in cities which provide optimum care to the kids than their families. Over there, centres staff provides best facilities to the children. Which results to make kids more creative and make them multi-talented in there early ages, either in art activity or in academic.
In conclusion, for the upbringing of children family care is optimum than the centres.As, they gives moral and ethical values to children, whereas centres provide only theoretical knowledge to children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'received the best'.
Suggestion: received the best
...well. However, critics reckon that they received best care from childcare centre rather than ...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Elder
...elp them to rid out from their problems.Elder member of family: grandparents, keep i...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms.Elder member of family: grandparents, keep in-touch the children with their cu...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h their culture and traditional values. Which assist them to make the best member of ...
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Line 4, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...to make the best member of the society. Thats why, upbringing of children should be t...
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Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in nations number of Centres are opened in town for the betterment of the dwelle...
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Line 6, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he kids than their families. Over there, centres staff provides best facilities t...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provides the best'.
Suggestion: provides the best
...ir families. Over there, centres staff provides best facilities to the children. Which resul...
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Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...family care is optimum than the centres.As, they gives moral and ethical values to...
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Line 8, column 96, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...re is optimum than the centres.As, they gives moral and ethical values to children, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72744716193 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7252765877 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346009768658 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136995240241 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736137209252 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213617571278 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104040182265 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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