Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Currently employment options can be diverse from area to area. Self-employment is the rising trend among most people nowadays rather than be employed in a company or an organization. This essay will discuss why this trend is becoming popular, while pointing out the down sides of self-employment.
Most people argue that this trend have many plus sides than working for an employer. People chose this option not only because it is higher in profit and income than the salary, they get from a potential employer but also the freedom they have and more quality time they can spend with their family. Moreover, he can be whatever he likes when self-employed, either selling his skills as a service or as a retail store owner. As an example, motor mechanics likes to work independent and usually open service shops in their garage, this would help them to stop work at any time while spending the time with their family.
But nowadays this will not be the best option. While linking to the first example I made, we can highlight several disadvantages that can make people rethink about this trend. First of all, while most technology embedded vehicles are rapidly improving, the technical person who do the maintenance and troubleshooting also need to be updated and also people tend to look for certified service centers so business not always be stable. Secondly, concentration you have to put on to the business can be disturbed while with the family.
So, in summary becoming self-employed will not be stable as being employed, because mainly your income will be not stable and skill improvements can be in doubt.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97426470588 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72203608136 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0404377621 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4187180012 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167874569041 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114251107888 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286564183666 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894164087993 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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