Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors.
Discuss both views and state your opinion by using examples from your personal experience.
It is arguable that the happiness depends on the person or it depends on the other factors. some believes it depends on the person. In my opinion, it is solely depends on that persons action not the other factors.
On one hand person can state happiness relies on the person. As an example, a person can say eating his favourite food makes them happy or travelling to the places he love makes him feel happy. Moreover listening to a favourite song or achieving their life goals make them feel happiness and I believe it is true that doing what they like can effect their psychological state. In my personal experience, I like to play computer games and it makes me happy, so that it's my actions caused me to be happy.
On the other hand people will say that happiness not only depends on the individual but also other factors like surrounding environment. As an example, children likes to get gifts from their parents so that their parents are the second factor that makes them happy. Mostly elderly people likes to visit less crowded parks or greener forests because they love to be in a silent environment because of that silent environment or park becomes the other factor. But to full fill the second factor one must take action.
In conclusion, its is hard to define how a person feel happy. In my opinion, I believe that the happiness is not depends on the other factors but the individuals actions because at the end it is that individuals action cause him to be happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...y opinion, it is solely depends on that persons action not the other factors. On o...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...em happy or travelling to the places he love makes him feel happy. Moreover listenin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...he places he love makes him feel happy. Moreover listening to a favourite song or achiev...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...er games and it makes me happy, so that its my actions caused me to be happy. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s actions because at the end it is that individuals action cause him to be happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66287878788 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47270452678 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7695279982 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174924022555 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823664691798 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673567702567 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118934207318 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414962598079 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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