Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Instead of having time restrained by taking up a particular career, more people are now starting their own businesses or working as a freelancer to escape from the work prison. Yet, doubt is casted on their conventional lifestyle as there might be hindered disadvantages on such adoption. This essay focuses on explaining the reason behind and discussing the pitfalls of being self-employed.
One salient cause of such phenomenon is the rising propensity on maintaining work-life balance of people especially the young generation. Being flexible in schedule planning, it provides them more freedom and ease to spend quality time with their loved ones, at the same time, tailor to their own needs. For instance, parents are allowed to take care of their newborns as they need not to commute to the workplace and leave their children to the care of others. Hence, stronger bonds are formed, which might in turn foster the development of the children.
However, some display an uninterested or even harsh attitude toward self-employment as they believe it would only cause more rigidity in life. Undeniably, working independently also implies the risk of being financially unstable and bearing all responsibility on one's shoulder. And there is no guarantee of an equivalent amount of income given to the time and efforts spent. In fact, often do self-employed people like freelance translators find it tough to sustain a living without taking up several jobs at the same time, which ends up spending more time on working. Thus, it leads to an opposite effect of their initial intention -- enjoying the privilege of a versatile lifestyle.
With all that being said, it is incontrovertible that self-employment is an option commonly adopted by people nowadays. Regardless of the potential drawbacks, people may always weigh the goods and bads and make the best decision for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'commute'?
Suggestion: commute
...care of their newborns as they need not to commute to the workplace and leave their childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25496688742 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98959626836 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4736132422 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248298153899 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827169725104 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753763311469 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163740917455 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059312315005 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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