In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
The sentiment of having a home to return to is ubiquitous to all people. However, for those whose desire is more than just living under a shelter, they prefer buying their own houses than renting one. This practice is particularly common in family-oriented cultures, which owning a home provide a sense of security. Yet regretful to say, in another way, it puts a restraint on life that I personally defy.
Being able to acquire a property not only represents one's financial capability, but also symbolizes his independence from his primary family. Nonetheless, understandably, people might find giving a part of their hard-earned money to someone else for a temporary place to stay in dreadful. Considering Asian countries like China, its traditional customs rule that a person can never build his own family without owning a property, as it represents one cannot stand on his own feet. If one does not have a home which he owns and returns to, he is not qualified as an independent, successful adult, needless to mention, a suitable partner for moving on to the next stage of life.
Despite the unnerving urge of purchasing a home, for people living in metropolitan cities where housing is scarce and property price skyrockets endlessly, this is nothing more than strangling one's neck with loans. Born and raised in Hong Kong, I am fully aware of how this seemingly unachievable goal distorts people's perceptions on leading a fruitful life. Many put their value on a contract and decide to sacrifice leisure for a house that merely demonstrates their compliance to social norms. They supposedly adventurous journey of life is degraded to a mundane task of holding onto a brick that produces only wealth, if not a never-ending chasing of recognition from anyone but oneself.
The need to own a personal safe heaven is inherited in our genes as inter-independent beings. Still, one should constantly ask himself the purpose of being and pursue his own aim to a life that is worth living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y, this is nothing more than strangling ones neck with loans. Born and raised in Hon...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun put seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many puts'.
Suggestion: Many puts
...perceptions on leading a fruitful life. Many put their value on a contract and decide to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.996996997 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96247425832 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642642642643 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.064879432 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235428208854 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705221209697 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484410711715 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133544227143 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339837670921 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.