Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
What might be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days increasingly more people are choosing to work for themselves instead of being employed. While having flexible working hours could be the most appealing reason, there are still potential risks involved in running your own business.
Flexible working hours may be the most common reason behind this trend. In other words, self-employed people can freely choose when to work, so that they have more time for other interests in life. Some people may choose to pursue a hobby, and others may prefer to spend this spared time with their families. So most people become self-employed because they want to be able to dictate how many hours they put in their work.
Having said that, the idea or running you own business comes with its own risks. Although people who are self-employed could enjoy flexible working hours, sometimes the line between work and leisure becomes blurred. Many business owners tend to become obsessed so they usually fall victim to the issue of work-life balance. So this defeats the original purpose of having more time to themselves.
To conclude, financial freedom coupled with flexible working hours may have made self-employment an attractive option, but before going into this type of employment, future business owners should consider some of the possible risks, with the financial one being the most critical.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... future business owners should consider some of the possible risks, with the financial one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2247706422 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47684759501 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1715581296 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.545454545 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282851126106 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11744047822 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822426742245 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183336833172 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635563638277 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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