Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
What might be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days increasingly more people are choosing to work for themselves instead of being employed. While having flexible working hours could be the most appealing reason, there are still potential risks involved in running your own business.
There are several reasons why self-employment is becoming a more popular option. The first reason could be financial freedom. The more they work, the more profit they make, so to a certain degree, owning a business allows people to be more financially independent. Flexible working hours, however, may be the most common reason behind this trend. In other words, self-employed people can freely choose when to work, so that they have more time for other interests in life. Some people may choose to pursue a hobby, and others may prefer to spend this spared time with their families. So most people become self-employed in order to avoid financial dependence on somebody else, but most importantly, they want to be able to dictate how many hours they put in their work.
Having said that, the idea of running your own business comes with its own risks. Although people who are self-employed could enjoy flexible working hours, sometimes the line between work and leisure becomes blurred. Many business owners tend to become obsessed so they usually fall victim to the issue of work-life balance. So this defeats the original purpose of having more time to themselves. The biggest problem, however, could lie with the financial risks. Running a business is not always plain sailing, and sometimes business owners have to make critical decisions that could either bring profits or cost the business altogether. This level of responsibility could place a severe strain on individuals health. But ironically, they cannot afford to fall ill simply because there is no financial compensation during a ‘sick leave’.
To conclude, financial freedom coupled with flexible working hours may have made self-employment an attractive option, but before going into this type of employment, future business owners should consider some of the possible risks, with the financial one being the most critical.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...sibility could place a severe strain on individuals health. But ironically, they cannot aff...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... future business owners should consider some of the possible risks, with the financial one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30205278592 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66054657857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7247500267 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268406478803 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960923295467 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755972424336 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184876428489 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767520097844 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.