Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

People of modern world often have inclination to start their own business and employ themselves. Although it has some transparent benefits that encourage people, we should not lose sight of its deterrents.
The main reason attributes to this trend is the priority of flexibility. As entrepreneurs can make a decision for their workplace and working time, which match their lifestyle and routine, and perfectly suit those who do not want 9 to 5 jobs. Because freelancing jobs figure challenge and variety that do not make them feel bored with. In addition, sometimes, they can have more comfortable income than other personnels in commensurate with their workload. This is truly the kind of work which modern citizen pursue.
However, everything has its own doubled-edge sword. Due to their work's characteristics, entrepreneurs cannot ensure their revenue stability, which means they have to put their worst situation scenario in to consideration. Since they are not paid by their position’s salary cap, they will not have steady pay for their income. Plus, self-employment requires people having attained abundant of work experiences and large-scale understanding to cover all responsibilities like administration, management, accounting, logistics, the list goes on. If they do not meet those requirements, their business will be led to go bankrupt.
All in all, while it is a firm possibility that self-employment is an ideal work style worth pursuing due to its advantages, it is not appropriate for those who lacks of essential potentials.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40517241379 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24045061898 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.259324868 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140677313928 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448233179217 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396965453423 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811221526057 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023685844486 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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