In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?

In this day and age, the Internet is on its way to incredibly become a game changer in almost every fields, including book-reading methods. While I appreciate that reading benefits a lot from e-books, I do not subcribe to the printed ones being drugs on the market.
There are various reasons constributed to my opinion. First of all, reading culture of orthodox version can never disappear owing to its perceived values for a long time. One of them is the full concentration, given that we are totally focusing on reading an free attractively e-book and an advertisement pops up out of the blue, takes us several seconds or even a minute to be allowed to close it. That is what online complimentary books figure, which would, in turn, distracting our books’ enjoyment. It is of no doubt that we are required to pay considerable attention for digestion of our real-page turners.
Secondly, there is of no evidence that numerous online books are completely replicated from the originals. Since there would be an abundance of policy-related adminitrations, therefore, result in the illicit complimetary ways of reading applications. However, if it is garanteed to be genuinly copied, it will lead to high incidence of infringement copyright, which is of underestimated action. Otherwise, readers are adviced to be polite and to find official paying book resources or buy printed books to show their respect to composers.
In conclusion, I will be a disenter towards the idea of the evaporation of conventional book versions. Because whether or not the reason the trifling advantages of reading e-books freely, the values of traditional book-reading culture will forever remain intact.

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ile I appreciate that reading benefits a lot from e-books, I do not subcribe to t...
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Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...that we are totally focusing on reading an free attractively e-book and an adverti...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... of conventional book versions. Because whether or not the reason the trifling advantages of r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16743296584 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6475501953 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23409351543 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771730055798 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049910461219 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144119971505 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460355153433 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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