Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
It is true that people tend to prefer open and operate their own company rather than become employees of other organizations. There are some reasons behind this issue and working as self-employed also has some drawbacks.
On the one hand, people become the owner bring many benefits for them. Firstly, working as self-employed provide the freedom in time for people. In other words, self-employed do not need follow the strict regualtions such as start woking at 7 a.m, they can arrange and choose the suitable time to start working. Therefore, they can spend more time to take care of their family and focus on developd themselves to become successful person in the future. Secondly, people run a company will reduce the pressure from other people when they do not achieve target. Self-employed can pay for them the amount of money as the results they gain during the process of working. Therfore, they will not feel stress with the KPI each month and become more comfortable when woking lead them more creative and gain the best result in business.
On the other hand, being self-employed has some disadvanatges. People become the owner of one company force them woking independently and this bring the challenge for them in seeking the opportunity for their organization. When people start working as self-employed, they will not received the support from other and invaribaly struggle in find the cooperation because the lack of experience and organize in operate the company. As the result, they will not have the benfits, even loss when run a company in the early day. Furthermore, self-employed must take more responsibility than employee in other enterprises. Their strategies and decision will affect to the life of their employees because it will impact on the income of them.
In conclusion, although the free in working time and the amount of pressure can reduce can create the motivation to start being self-employed, but it is also the dificult positions and contain many disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to follow'?
Suggestion: to follow
... other words, self-employed do not need follow the strict regualtions such as start wo...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
...working as self-employed, they will not received the support from other and invaribaly s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09118541033 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84677028118 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48632218845 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6162456399 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261557000204 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991939304332 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800429111788 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170589307146 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239974845384 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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