Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the advantages of being self employed?
Job is one of the most important things in our lives, and these days, a number of individuals prefer self-employment to working for an organization or a company. They choose to be self-employed in order to be autonomous and amass huge fortunes. I believe there are two advantages of working for oneself: a person can easily manage time to keep their work and life balanced and can earn more money independently than a monthly salary.
Most of the people choose to work for themselves because they believe it gives them autonomy and a chance to become financially strong. The reason behind this view is that when a person owns a company, he can make all its decisions alone and, most of the time, there is nobody to interfere in the process of decision-making. In addition, having one’s own business may provide more opportunities of earning money as a major portion of the profit is received by the owner alone. For instance, the only common characteristic of a large number of wealthy people is that they never worked under anybody else’s command.
In my view, work-life balance and becoming rich are the two main advantages of being self-employed. This is because the owner of an organization might not have fixed working hours and may have a flexible schedule; therefore, they can easily manage their time, thereby balancing their work and social life. Another advantage is that if an individual heads their own company, they can be financially independent and can earn more money than the salary they would receive while working for another firm. Thus, it is more profitable to be self-employed than working for another person or entity.
In conclusion, a majority of people believe that if they are self-employed, they will be able to amass great fortunes and be more autonomous. The major advantages of working this way, in my opinion, are greater work life balance due to efficient time management and more opportunities to become financially independent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ance, the only common characteristic of a large number of wealthy people is that they never worke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98784194529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94926504091 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2064781509 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323988279441 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144839469183 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118723755042 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228898686437 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983522144704 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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