Nowadays, many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children
In recent years, the technological revolution has advanced rapidly resulting in an increase in the number of youngsters playing electronic games with audio. In this essay, both the pros and cons of this situation will be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, it is clear that playing video games would bring about several advantages such as being a source of much-needed entertainment and an educational tool. Obviously, reducing the stress levels after a day of hard work in school is what games are all about. For example, seeing that users could be unwinded, gamers are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exhilarating and attention-grabbing than real-life pastimes.From educational perspective,these games enhance imagination and creativity, as well as analyzing and problem-solving skills, all of which are useful skills outside the game context.One illustration is the" Brain Out" game, which requires gamers to think thoroughly, plan ahead strategically and solve the problems in order to win matches or proceed to the next stages of the game.
Despite these aforementioned benefits, many drawbacks do exist like distraction, and violent context.One evident weakness is that children would take the mind off school work due to attention span being completely on games,thus,this possibly have an adverse impact on academic performance.In particular, if users take a seat in front of the computer for a long time constantly, it will make them sleep-deprived and altogether depleted.Therefore, their grades will doubtless come down due to less concentration on lecture.Second, The problem is that a few games are fairly violent and unsuitable for their ages. It means that users are put in for to kill,shoot , punch,stab and the like. Furthermore, these games may lead to aggressive feelings, thoughts and behaviors.
In conclusion, there are plus point to play electronic games with audio regarding relaxation and education.However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of distraction and violent context.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61858974359 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48216430692 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.248167308 49.4020404114 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.777777778 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246229144076 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874842284492 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487977718594 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122563062653 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354640777588 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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