Topic:In the past ,most people used to travel to their place of work .With increased use of computers,the internet and smart phones ,more and more people are starting work from home.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
The advancement of technologies has enabled people to work remotely from home by using a device connected to the internet rather than commuting daily to work. In this essay, I will discuss both the pros and cons of this evolving.
On the one hand, it is clear that telecommuting would bring about several advantages such as time-saving, cost-effective to commute; and freedom. To be more specific, traveling to work is wasting time and money, but for teleworking, it does not matter. For instance, in big cities, millions of people every day travel from their houses to the office and get stuck in traffic almost one-two or even more hours during the rush hour. In addition, working from home is a whole lot more pleasant for many people. This exemption comes from the fact that the laborers do not have to obey the principles of working environment about clothing, manners, time and position. To give a clear example, workers can work in their beds or living room and actively arrange the time.
However, telecommuting is not completely beneficial, there are several negative aspects that should be taken into account like distraction and lack of social interaction. In many cases, employees can be disturbed by their home environment. One illustration is your children ,noise from your neighbor and the like. Another evident weakness is separating people from an office environment. In the office, workers can be doing work more efficiently, as they are in a team with other colleagues. For example, if the employee has any problem with his or her work, he or she can have advocacy from supportive teammates or superiors.
In conclusion, there are plus points to telework regarding economizing in time and cash. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of turning away from work as well as lack of social communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04262295082 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8623720719 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0552269424 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30031430256 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898388718672 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684975449001 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171493884778 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769487546751 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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