Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
In these days many people are having access to computers at many regions and many children are playing computer games. This essay will discuss first the problem which is that children are spending too much time on video games followed by the suggested solution which will be letting them play different sport and spending more time with their friends to prevent them from unhealthy life.
Kids nowadays are addicted to video games they are indulged to them. Even though it’s a good way spending time ,they are doing this on the lap of other important things ,but this really can effect in an opposite way . Sitting hours playing affect their eyes, brains and their whole body. In 2018 a child’s hand was burned because one of the playstation’s handheld.
We cannot stop our daughters and sons from doing something that they like but we can try reduce how many times they are spending on these games. Every family should start by itself , we can invest their free time by letting them play new sports and do knew actions or helping them make new friends near their homes that they can see and play with. This will protect them from plenty of deceases one of them is “ Obesity “ and let them see the life from a new fresh perspective.
At the end we knew that video games should be something for entertainment not the only activity that should be done or it will cause a lot of problems. We should make a separate time for these games that doesn’t exceed one and half hour to let them have fun in their life in the right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65703971119 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29287050965 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7518112962 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178549649107 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797770241565 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109965100963 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118542988324 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855529759301 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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