Nowadays many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before What are the reasons what can employers do to make their life easier

Essay topics:

Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? what can employers do to make their life easier?

Stress is a big problem in today's workplace. This eassy will show some reason of stress and will discuss the stress to reduce.

There are plathora of causes of stress in the workplace. To begin with, excessively high workload with unrealistic deadlines, makes people feel pressurized. Similarly, they are given more workload to check their skills and this is unfair. One of my friend family member was working in macdonalds and is manager there and she was having less staff to work with at that time she was no able to handle things alone because being a manger the duties are double than the employer in that situation they can get pressurized or get stressed which is not good for mental and physical health. There may be lack of interpersonal support or poor working realtionship leading to sense of isloation.

Furthermore, stressed can be caused due to job security and less pay or might be having bad experience with your co-worker like harrasment which can lead employer feel uncomfortable or insecurity with other workers as well. Last but not least, poor working enviroment like heat cold or noise oruncomfortble seating may also lead to stress.

Employers can take lots of step to cope with workplace like if they fell their job is giving them workload they shoukd talk to there manager or whoever is the supervisor to give them less worload and provide them a full day off for thier health. Next thing they should fix atleast one day to sit with their worker and discuss about thier job like what problem they are facing with and should also review performance to know what skills they have and nmatch thier skills to give only that work to reduce stress.

And employer should also consider how much hours they need to work and if any eomloye is sick they should provide day off for thier health.

To sum up, stress at the workplace is an issue of greate concern. they should take rest to reduce thier stress otherwise the stress will reduce thier efficency of working.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lots of steps
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Suggestion: many
... And employer should also consider how much hours they need to work and if any eoml...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...orkplace is an issue of greate concern. they should take rest to reduce thier stress...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, well, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7884057971 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41848583291 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1315401394 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266413590136 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841819881561 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391691384781 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125280221242 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457686285372 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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