Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree.
These days, there are a lot of people who do their work from home; either it is a part-time or a full-time job. People have argued about it, as some of them believe that working from home has many advantages while others do not agree with it. The following essay will discuss in details about it, but in some circumstances, I would agree if working from home some benefits for employee and employers themselves.
It is a fact that online and portable device technologies have changed the way people communicate, correspond and work. With these advanced technologies, people could open their email, browse the internet and even connect to their company’s system anywhere, as long as they are connected to the internet. As a result, many companies are offering some of their employees to work from their home nowadays, as they believed that working from home would give benefits for both parties. For the employers’ point of view, it would save the office rental space and electricity cost, as they do not have to provide desks and chairs for those who are working from home. While from the employee’s perspective, working from home give them flexibility in managing their time, and also save the transportation cost.
On the other hand, some people disagree with this condition, as they believe that working from home is not an effective thing. Firstly, they believe that having an eye to eye contact is an essential thing in improving the coordination and cooperation between superior and staffs or among working colleagues. Secondly, it is difficult for companies in controlling their employees who are working from home. And lastly, they think that employees who are working from home will find difficulties in doing their task, as they might get distractions from their children.
In conclusion, it is true that many people are working from their home nowadays. While some people believe that this condition brings benefits for companies and employers, others disagree with it. In my opinion, I think the best way for people to work is at their workplace as they could focus on their work, and also socialise with their working partners, but under some circumstances, we could work from home. For example, during the storm or flood, we could continue to be productive by working from our home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74595211061 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464935064935 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8148759584 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500977629403 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226598666295 0.084324248473 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116541176264 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384330379853 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853892450313 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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