Nowadays, mass media have a profound impact on shaping people’s idea. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledge that mass media has become an indispensable part in a daily basis, because it not only facilitate the interaction between people in a more convenient way but it is also a useful aid to shaping people’s idea. In my viewpoint, I strongly agree with this perspective due to some aspects which will be discuss in the essay below.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons why mass media almost occupies a monopoly position on information transmission as a milestone. The fundamental reason is that mass media comprises both printed format and digital format which are widely available today. As a result, citizens have a chance to expose to the news in a more convenient way thanks to the ubiquity of mass media. However, if people become more familiar with it, they will make decisions based on media. Additionally, when people are likely to be affected by their surroundings, they may have a tendency to acquire the information arbitrarily without careful analysis which leads to various risks. For example, there is a great number of false news on the social networking website and this may lead the public orientation in a negative way due to the lack of critical thinking.
On the other hand, in spite of the fact that mass media encompasses a significant amount of convincing information, many people are still skeptical about its accuracy. Firstly, the source of information can be distorted, exaggerated or even fabricated from the truth. Consequently, there is no doubt that people will lose their faith upon the mass media because of imprecise information. Secondly, while the mass media provides a wealth of information but many people still spend lots of time to interact with their families or friends and it is a good way to argue about the news. For instant, members in the family may stay in front of the televisions and share the idea about the topic with each other. As a result, they can keep their eyes on many aspects of the situation more carefully.
In conclusion, I hold a strong belief that people’s idea these days is relying on mass media is undeniable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'acknowledged'.
Suggestion: acknowledged
It is widely acknowledge that mass media has become an indispens...
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Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd this may lead the public orientation in a negative way due to the lack of critical thinking. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90277777778 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84744714559 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547222222222 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6252924395 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5333333333 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227408004125 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776261666798 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629858678309 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162159804369 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371785673081 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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