Nowadays more and more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think it happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?
In today's generation, time is highly regarded as one of the most important aspect in a person's life. However, there are those people who sacrifice themselves and spend more of this away from home. This does not only affect them but also the members of the family and the society as a whole.
There are individuals who are career-oriented and spend a lot of time trying to earn a living while others go to the university to gain a degree. In fact, some of them would go to different part-time jobs to provide them financially while studying. Aside from that, workers tend to go on vacation leaves so they can go out of town. They do this to unwind and have a relaxing time away from work. Some of the places they tend to go to are at the beach, in the mountains or in other countries like Hong Kong.
However, being away from home makes them isolated from all the happenings in the family because they fail to have a personal communication with them. On a positive note, they become most likely successful in their endeavors because of the outcome of their career. They tend to be more competent and are able to handle different challenges or be flexible in varying situations. As a result, they become important workers in the society and can earn a higher standard of living which financially aids their families.
In conclusion, people are not always at home because of the different jobs they have or being at school while some go on vacations when they take the time of from work. This can have a positive and a negative effect but can certainly help their families as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the family and the society as a whole. There are individuals who are career-ori...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s a whole. There are individuals who are career-oriented and spend a lot of time...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...nd have a relaxing time away from work. Some of the places they tend to go to are at the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53601617946 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6125710797 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205651373473 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754164084358 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627336211252 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141628268559 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584824562946 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.