Today, many couples do not want to plan baby till age of 30. There are numerous reasons to support this thought but primary reason is that they are avid to establish themselves as successful person before expanding family. Though, this though is fruitful in terms of better planning, It has some drawback as well. I will discuss them in following paragraphs.
To start with positives, new generation wants to stabilize their career at younger age. They can concentrate on their jobs or business without taking any bothered and responsibilities of family. It is generally believed that older parents are nurturing child better. These seems valid because older parents are wealthier, experienced and willing to take responsibilities of bringing up a child.
Moreover, being parents at upper age is two edge of swords in terms of health. One has more physical strength at mature age to endure extreme pain over the pregnancy period whereas, sometimes, women face physical complication in fertilization process at upper age. As a result, they have to satisfy themselves by other alternatives such as test-tube baby. Not only physical complication, there is enough evidence to prove that it is very difficult to focus on both jobs/business and family simultaneously. Hence, parents who are at higher position in their field at mature age may get less time to spend with their little ones. Therefore, a child may feel lonely and overlook their parents in some cases.
In conclusion, Although, being parents at mature age offers prosperous life to their children, Its drawback also take into consideration while thinking about family planing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in some cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25475285171 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91547470772 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661596958175 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6989208493 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111517887348 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320709740841 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274872201118 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666565733779 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225795552528 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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