Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
An ever-increasing number of couples recently have been found to decide to take parental roles later in their life. There are numerous reasons explaining why they are drawn to do so, thereby it is understandable that this trend may leave impacts on society in general and family life in particular.
There are two major explainations why more and more couples want to have kids when they are young. Firstly, some individuals prioritize their career in lieu of having children, especially when they are young, enthusiastic, dynamic and at their peak of their career. Instead of taking care of their children, they spend their valuable time to endeavour to their works in order to increase the productivity in companies which is conducive to their future promotion and their desired income. Secondly, others of the opinion that youth is the precious time to enjoy life on their own without waring about any commonly received responsibility, such as being parents.
However, the decision of having children late is detrimental to family life as well as the society. Regarding family life, it will be more challenging for parents to bond close-knit relationship with their children due to the generation gap. There will be a huge difference in thinking of the two generations, thus, they oftentimes do not share the same voice together. On society scale, giving birth at old ages easily affects health of mothers and babies. For example, women who are over 35 years old are likelihood to have miscarriage or stillbirth if they are pregnant. Also, in case they give birth successfully, their children are more likely to have DOWN syndromes. Consequently, it will have adverse impacts on healthcare system of a country and the productivity of the economy.
In conclusion, it seems to me that prioritize career and utilize youth for enjoying life are reasons why more young couples decide to have babies late. However, this trend may leave negative impacts on both family and society.
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Suggestion:
...ive impacts on both family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81811553133 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6024690588 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341870020347 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11385966402 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720412623124 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214508069426 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162225741036 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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