Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In today’s modern society, it has become more common for people to eat out rather than preparing food at home. I personally believe that the downsides of this trend are weightier than the upsides.
On the one hand, there are several merits of having meals prepared by a restaurant. To begin with, it could be seen that purchasing food is more convenient than making it at home. People, especially those who have to work long hours, do not have to prepare their own meals, which generally takes a huge amount of time. Moreover, when eating at a restaurant, people could have more opportunities to try a variety of dishes. Several dishes, especially those coming from another cuisine, require special ingredients or preparations. For instance, it is extremely complicated to prepare sushi from Japan at home.
On the other hand, I am firmly convinced that the demerits of eating out are more considerable. First, one might not be able to determine the quality of the food. It is hard for them to make sure that the ingredients that the restaurant uses are fresh or not. For example, many restaurants in Vietnam often reuse their cooking oil many times, which is really harmful to consumers’ health. Another drawback of having ready-made meals is that it is generally more expensive than home-prepared ones. The main reason is that people have to pay for not only the food but also the service fees. Some eateries even charge their customers with a small amount of tax.
In conclusion, purchasing food instead of cooking at home has both good points and bad points. However, it is my firm belief that the negative effects are more significant than the positive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90492957746 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66408320396 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3446436748 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9411764706 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290276983132 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901545627523 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906917489339 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206947234323 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824177149638 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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