Nowadays most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
In the modern era, people have to be cautious about their health to compete for each other, but these days the majority of people keep them unfit and inactive when it comes to work or to do things. However, modern technology and an unhealthy lifestyle have a significant impact on this concentration, which can be solved by increasing physical exercise and following a healthy lifestyle.
On the one hand, the advancement of technology has improved human lives, which leads people to a stage where they do not need to work much. Using modern technology, such as a computer, laptop, and mobile phone makes our life easier. This dependence on electronic devices has given rise to major problems, including, unwilling to work, obesity, and many health issues. Thus, when people work from home as it does not require them to go out which makes them inattentive. Additionally, some people are addicted to mobile phones, even use this device since when they wake up in the morning until going to bed. Consequently, this has been created various health hazards, for instance, obesity. In other words, the recent finding has found that 80% of people who do not work and depending on the inherited property are less active, besides, they become obese.
On the other hand, one solution that has been put forward is to involve in daily exercise, therefore, body parts will be active when the blood circulation is increased, which makes people get motivated to do regular work. In addition, one feasible solution that can be done to resolve this matter is to avoid an unpopular lifestyle. To illustrate, the Japanese are a strong example, who succeeded by following a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, in the past people used to do work actively, moreover, they were kept them fit, eating healthy food, and doing hard work which is included in physical exercise, whereas at present people are not that aware of their health even they want to find the simplest way to do their daily activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94626865672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414832045 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2377267017 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143956182334 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496620023522 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388501092395 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885002369706 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373349541126 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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