Nowadays an ordinary person can become a popular through the internet and TV series. is it a positive or negative development. give your opinion with relevant example.
In this dazzling world everyone want to touch the zenith of success.presently, common people can become prominent by using internet and television. Here, I would like to account it's positives.
There are manifold advantages of this trend. First and foremost, internet and television is the fabulous source to get name and fame without wasting much time. For example, ordinary people who are the owner of exceptional talent can depicts their talent by making videos and uploading on social networking sites.Thus, common person can become eminent through internet. What is more, working in television and on internet give people aristocratic life and millions of fans. To be specific,a common person who become popular through television can not only fulfill his desires such as ravishing house, luxury car, and many others, but also stay in the heart of his fans. Thus, a common person can get immense pleasure with the help of internet and television.
Numerous benefits can be mentioned. The idea to become popular through television and internet is a boon for destitute people in this competitive era. To illustrate, in different sectors affluent people give money in order to become prominent and commen people who have some talent seems helpless.Hence, the idea to use internet and television for common person is lucrative.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, there are some other way for common person to achieve success .However, still I believe that internet and television is more easiest and comfortable way to become celebrate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
...believe that internet and television is more easiest and comfortable way to become celebrate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34567901235 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86217467946 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3496471979 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233394516424 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865131706685 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058795694906 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134435419627 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652138876554 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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