Nowadays parents fulfill all the demands of their children and allow them to do everything. Is it good for them or not.give reasons of this trend.
It is well said that today's children are the future of tomorrow. Presently, parents have tendency to fulfil all the needs of their children and give permission to do that they want to do. Here, I would like to account that it is not good for children and give reasons of this trend.
There are manifold reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, children can become more extravagant if parents complete their demands. Taking a real life example, there is a boy in my neighborhood whose parents give everything what he want as a result he become spendthrift. Thus, giving everything to children does not fully holds the water. What is more, children face inconvenience in their life if parents allow them to do according to their choice.To be specific, children are amateur and nodo not know about the good and bad sometimes they can take wrong decision related to their future if they get freedom regarding decision. Therefore, this idea is not fruitful for juveniles.
Numerous negatives can be mentioned. Children can not understand the value of things if their guardians give them everything.To illustrate, parents can not inculcate their children about the importance of money and things in life if they continue to fulfill the dreams of their children. Hence, the idea of competing everything to kids is good for nothing.
To recapitulate, children age is the golden age of human life. Undeniably, it is the duty of parents to nourish their children and complete their desires. However, I still believe that parents must control for providing everything for children's better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73973373798 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.4470171279 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383536895129 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120299742102 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817435992089 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248077046386 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049519042577 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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