some people say that subject like art, drama, add creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore thay need more of these subject to be included in the timetable. do you agree or disagree.
Arts have little or no place in the educational curriculum so far because we have a feeling that time spent on thses things is time wasted.Recent study, however, have shown that a good curriculum that include arts education can have multiple benefits which I shall highlights in this essay.
The most important benefits of arts in school is that it contributes to making a well rounded student.Not only that, certain forms of arts instruction enhance and compliment basic skills such as basic reading skill, language development and writting skills.so, children do well in other subject also.
Another advantage is that it encourages the pursuit of extra curricular activities.children get a chance to show their creative expression. When such hidden activities are exposed with School time then those with exceptional talent can be encouraged it to adopt it as a profession later on in life.It is well known fact that people in such profession are earning telephone figure salaries nowadays.
Last but not least, such subject are stress buster.In the highly competitive era of today. Pressure of academic subjects are too high. Arts like drama, music break the monotony of tough academic study.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that our educational curriculum needs a serious revision and more of such subjects need to be added to the school curriculum.They compliment academic study,bring out hidden talent and break the ennui of tough academic study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23206751055 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94863358076 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.149332672 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178781607799 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752921468734 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339086701389 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901206417771 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397585981858 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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