Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.
What is the reason for doing this?
Is this a negative or positive development?
It is phenomenal that parents are now having much more higher expectation of success on their children. As I believe the major reason for that tendency comes from the parents’ concern of the children future, I would rather argue that the amount of pressure creating by parents can negatively impact on the children development.
It is indisputable that in today competitive world, being successful at a young age might guarantee a higher chance of success of a person when they reach adulthood. Therefore, as duty parents, it is understandable that the adults will try their best to encourage their children working hard towards the target. For example, in Vietnam, students from all ages are enrolled in extra classes during their entire school time by their mom or dad, since the first day they start at the primary school until only before they get to college. According to many Vietnamese parents, this would ensure for the children the opportunity to get to the best school in which they can pursue the high quality of education and then secure a prospective career in the future.
Unfortunately, forcing children hard on getting successful outcome can bring more drawbacks than expected. Being forced to do something that beyond ability might make children become stressful or even affect their mental health. For instance, if a child is not good at Math, it may be difficult for him or her to be on top of the class in this subject. Thus, in order to achieve the result that would please the parents, the student has to spend an abundance of time of studying Math while always worrying about low scores, and get exhausted as an inevitable consequence. Additionally, putting pressure on the result can also kill the children’s creativity, as they will only focus on how to get the result quickest, not on how to do the task in many new different ways they are capable of doing.
In conclusion, although creating pressure somehow is useful in helping children succeed, it is believed to affect badly on children mental health, the willingness to try and excitement to explore new things of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...omenal that parents are now having much more higher expectation of success on their childre...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ldren mental health, the willingness to try and excitement to explore new things of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94943820225 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75996547406 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564606741573 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0521949791 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.833333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248152008654 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866524592475 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057773304379 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151851195476 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614048964564 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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