Nowadays people get married and have children after 30years. I strongly believe that, younger generation avoiding marrying without they are success in social and finance. Actually, this is negative think in young age group.
Since, young generation fastly move to high academic studies after school.That is the good development on their side. A group of age 20-30 is improving to do degrees and professional qualification. In additionally, they try to settle down with financial and social as well. Therefore, most youngest avoid early marriage, because of they do not have good experience and not stable in their life.
On the other side, if we spend more time with highest studies, our marriage getting late. Therefore, some certain areas are creating big issues. The scientist, mention after 30years women have issue with given child birth. As well as, parents also try to push up to marriage. Furthermore, parents do not have time to spend with their grandchild. Also, that age people are very strong with health and physical working too.
At this age people think is directly involve to the country development and population. Therefore, this is negative think and should be change in youngest.
In conclusion, marriage life is the changing life style and younger group should think hard before take a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...e to high academic studies after school.That is the good development on their side. ...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od development on their side. A group of age 20-30 is improving to do degrees and...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'youngest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: youngest
...inancial and social as well. Therefore, most youngest avoid early marriage, because of they d...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...re, most youngest avoid early marriage, because of they do not have good experience and not sta...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...n the other side, if we spend more time with highest studies, our marriage getting late. The...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
...e, this is negative think and should be change in youngest. In conclusion, marriage l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23943661972 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65305990961 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5523696094 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.75 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3125 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188702206822 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667114783799 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920774841474 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10480592063 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084771733481 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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