nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. why do you think this happens? is this a positive or negative try and give your opinion and example from your own experience.
exploring various malls and big markets for shopping has become a trend for most of the communities. nevertheless, the aforementioned trend has a detrimental impact on local shops. as per my notion, more discounts, a wide range of product variety at the same place and customer's ease made people visit big stores rather than nearest shops. as a result, it has a profound impact on economy and Employment of country.
to begin with, consumers have an opportunity to get a wider range of products with discounted price at supermarkets only. not just this, redeem cards and club vouchers attract them to do excessive shopping - in order to get surprising gifts and redeem points. consider, for example, redeem cards has noticeably surged a sales figure in India by 30%, as per the statistic revealed by the Indian marketing research centre. as a result of attractive price, future financial benefits and range of products from various dealers play an indispensable role in this changed shopping trend.
secondly access to Multiplex and food outlets at the same place poured proxy on behalf of this modern Trend.eventually not for the shopping purpose but some of the theme malls accounted in order to do fun and enjoyment, especially in weekends. In Dubai- the city of gold - the mall named as the Dubai Mall is well known as a tourist place due to its infrastructure and surroundings. seeing in this light people can kill two birds with a single stone by visiting such kind of supermarkets.
on a practical note, this trend created a numerous job opportunity in most of the city, which eventually cater to address the serious concern of unemployment. Alongside it facilitate the process for bulk dealers and manufacturers. By this I mean to say they have to deal with only selected store to deliver products rather than getting an order from various small shops. so this trend proves as a positive promotion for employment and professional prospectives.
in a nutshell, albeit this trend Prove as a Grave danger for local dealers but advantage outweighs the disadvantages. in the future, this trend undoubtedly will gain more popularity and 2 as a breakthrough in a field of the market for shopping.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i mean', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300995024876 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.114427860697 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.092039800995 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373134328358 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0174129353234 0.0437548338989 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1592039801 0.122226691241 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0273631840796 0.0403226058552 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97820265051 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273631840796 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116915422886 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00497512437811 0.021408717616 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00248756218905 0.011925033212 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2217.0 1933.35771543 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 316.048096192 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0081300813 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346883468835 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260162601626 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184281842818 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132791327913 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97820265051 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 64.8906539544 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7058823529 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0780335981 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.411764706 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.7221425155 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.88235294118 1.69124875643 170% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211267475407 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0802055269454 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0552578614262 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529305378978 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13315729399 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882325789739 0.134430193775 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410648281789 0.0742795772207 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307585815729 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0591805806351 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144995232042 0.228012699653 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302472162351 0.058150111329 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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