Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throwaway Society outweigh any possible economic advantages?
With the rise of modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take the first step on the moon. One of the most contraversial issue today relates to whether this use and throw method is beneficial for people or not? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the disadvantages of this considerably outweigh its benefits. Demand of the people for using macinery is increasing day by day, and it create more pollution, and waste electricity, gas etc. One of the good illustration of this is that, In summer; the demand of air conditionor is higher, and companies produce more air conditionor with the help of machine. They pay more attention towards their product and use large amount of electricity; this situation also lead to air pollution because of the wastage of the factories.
On the other hand, there are a group of people who believe that with the help of this adaption; Employment is increased. For example; when the demand of new things is increased then companies place more worker in the factories to fulfill their needs. This step provide the facility of job opportunities. Moreover, it also helpful for providing economic and personal growth of a country.
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that if government take initiative to overcome this problem, and make the use of 3R: Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle compulsory wherever applicable then the reduction of this difficulty is possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91007194245 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84116422811 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8617702419 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0672068466444 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252539835571 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347138966858 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394983240396 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264573248378 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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