Some people believe that should people keep all money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, money plays a very vital role for fulfill our three basic need: food, clothe, and shelter. Without these we cannot survive. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether it is important; to keep money or to pay taxes to the government? I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, government should take the money from the people in the form of taxes; to fulfill the needs of the mankind by providing them facilities like development, education, medical services etc. ; but a poor person can not get advantage from this, because he is poor, and neglected by others. So, poor people think why they pay taxes or fill returns; if they cannot take help from this in future. One good illustration of this is; when a middle class person think about the study of their children in government school, but cannot send their ward in the government school because of the lack of teachers; then he thought that why should government take taxes from them if they do not provide good study system in schools, and he studied their ward in private schools and pay more amount. This is the reason he do not pay taxes.
Secondly, medical facilities also not good in government hospitals in india. It runs without doctors. A poor person cannot go in government hospital but go to private hospitals and pay huge amount for treatment.
Overall, there are number of answers to this question. On balance; however, i tend to believe that if government provide proper facilities to the rich as well as poor then the tax will be paid by all the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78169014085 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47795823377 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7932705669 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180690797069 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561041081267 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583859175544 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878559352529 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05257556443 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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