The issue that people waste food has become increasingly serious these years in many nations. In my opinion, people’s lack of awareness is the main cause of this problem, and if governments take effective measures, this situation will probably be improved.
Thanks to the development of farming methods, the price of food has significantly reduced and become highly affordable to most ordinary people. When eating / dining in shops and restaurants, many individuals tend to order more food than they need. However, only a small proportion of them develop the habit of packing the leftover if they cannot finish the meal. As a result, it is quite common to see that many dishes are left unfinished and end up in rubbish bins eventually. In Shanghai, for example, the amount of food dumped annually is worth a stunning / a staggering 1.4 million dollars which could feed thousands of people living in poverty in Africa.
I believe that governments have a tremendous role to play in reversing this situation. The significant measure authorities should implement is to enhance the public awareness of the importance of saving grains. This can be done through various means ranging from distributing flyers among communities to playing public interest advertisements on TV. Regarding the content, since most consumers take food for granted, it could include the fact that there are a multitude of people dying from starvation in certain developing countries. In this way, individuals are likely to become more conscious of the fact that they are fortunate to have enough to eat and hopefully change their habit of wasting food when dining in restaurants.
In conclusion, it seems to me that lack of awareness is the major contributor to people’s food wasting behavior nowadays, but this problem can be addressed to a great extent if / provided that the government invests in educating its people.
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as South Pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 61
- the graph below shows predictions about the numbers of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temperatures higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How should we deal with this problem 73
- Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life Others say that experiences as a teenager especially at school are more influential Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation Why is this the case What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19543973941 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88012493948 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2832464614 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268304789843 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857476206079 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694087726249 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167143577521 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144984171505 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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