Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?
With increase in pace of time, a man changed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that, are there more merits of private car ownership rather than its demerits? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with some examples and assertions.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits outweigh its disadvantages. The prominent reason for believing this is time saving. Similarly, Private car ownership gives the facility for driving to office on time. Thus, if people will take public transportation such as, bus it will be difficult for them to reach office early because bus stops at different bus stations which can delay us to office time. Good illustration of this is, in a recent survey of indian multinational company shown that most of the employees come late to office because they do not have person car and get late in public transportation due to traffic.
On the other hand it is also possible to make opposing case. It is often argued that in fact commerce people will have more private cars then there will be more pollution. People often have this viewpoint because pollution is one of the major issues of the economy. Moreover, pollution is harmful for everybody and it also increases amount of diseases. However, environment is also polluted because of plethora of vehicles which work either from petrol or diesel. Both petrol and diesel engines produce toxic emissions by burning the fuel and due to this there is enhancement in pollution which destroys the atmosphere level. Likewise, it is one the main reason for global warming as well.
As we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that, there are more critical disadvantages of private car ownership rather than its advantages. As we all know that life of an individual is more important then time management.
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...life of an individual is more important then time management.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98575498575 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70774602573 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558404558405 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3512110557 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179957951292 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518492624949 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570867745226 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114939995635 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404753933512 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.