Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?
With increase in pace of time, a man changed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, given topic asserts that, are there more merits of private car ownership rather than its demerits? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with some examples and assertions.
First step to understand that why some people argue that the benefits outweigh its disadvantages? The prominent reason for believing this is time saving. Similarly, Private car ownership gives the facility for driving to office on time. Thus, if people will take public transportation such as, bus it will be difficult for them to reach office early because bus stops at different bus stations which can delay us to office time. Good illustration of this is, in a recent survey of indian multinational company shown that most of the employees come late to office because they do not have personal car and get late in public transportation due to traffic.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make opposing case. It is often argued that in fact, if people will have more private cars than there will be more pollution. People often have this viewpoint because, pollution is one of the major issues of the economy. Moreover, it is harmful for everybody and also inclines amount of diseases. However, environment is also polluted because of plethora of vehicles which work either from petrol or diesel. Both petrol and diesel engines produce toxic emissions by burning the fuel, while due to that there is enhancement in pollution which destroys the atmosphere level as well.As a result, it is a reason for global warming.
As we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that, there are some critical disadvantages of private car ownership rather than its advantages. As we all know that, life of an individual is more important than time saving.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9710982659 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70334900203 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5632448036 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5263157895 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181244551557 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552247728074 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604082186475 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11481811196 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443756608667 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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