Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies
rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to
society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, it is obviously observed that media news concentrating on social and urgent
issues is more popular than positive development. Consequently, many people argued
that this situation brings more detrimental impacts individually and socially. Although
this trend can be positive to some extent, I am of the opinion that its negative effects are
more significant.
On the one hand, it is true to say that when the news is filled with social matters and
emergencies, it contributes positively to the damage reduction regarding natural
disasters. For instance, the development of weather forecast and news programs
provides accurate and latest information in terms of the change of weather, social evils
and current affairs. Thanks to the development of weather-forecasting methods, people,
especially who are residents in the most affected area, have a tendency of being more
cautious and having better preparation for the coming natural threats. Likewise, a high
frequency of reports on social problems such as criminals, social evils and so on brings
tremendous influences on raising people’s awareness, encouraging them to obey the
laws and deterring them from committing crimes.
On the other hand, a focus on bad news and emergencies might pose threats on people’s
mind and society. For instance, the thing that terrorism is increasing makes tourists
become concerned and more hesitate to decide which country to visit. To some extent,
audiences and readers are more likely to be unnecessarily pessimistic about daily life.
Meanwhile, from a social perspective, the risks that children try to intimate these social
evils are existing, especially whom are not educated well. Indeed, being rebellious is the
first signal, then bullying others and even committing crimes in the near future if they
are too affected and addicted to these harmful reports.
All things considered, negatives impacts of media reports on problems and emergency
issues are much more than its positive sides. Consequently, the volume of these news
should be modified reasonably in order to reduce the potential risks and threats on
individuals and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...orecasting methods, people, especially who are residents in the most affected area, ha...
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Line 28, column 75, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...tive sides. Consequently, the volume of these news should be modified reasonably in order...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, likewise, regarding, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6036036036 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97011723189 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.568724759 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169173593807 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581875840842 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509021785812 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423015981578 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474387807974 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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