Nowadays university education is very expensive. Some people say that
universities should reduce their fees, especially for the less fortunate students
or those coming from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree
with this statement?
In two recent decades, the cost of tuitions in universities has increased
significantly and people have concerned that students who are less privileged or
from rural areas, cannot afford to pursue a university degree / to partake in
university courses. I am strongly in favor of the opinion that universities should
decrease their fees.
Frist and foremost, education is the basis/foundation of any development of
society. There is a direct correlation that the developed countries have high
education quality. Especially their universities can create many doctors, scientists,
experts in numerous fields. Furthermore, these experts assist their countries with
great research, boosting the economy, education, science, medicine, etc.
Therefore, every nation needs the highly educated and productive workforce but
the high fees at universities prevent the opportunities from reaching all citizens.
Besides, students are under great financial pressure, having the less sufficient
learning than they are possible. As we know, there are many students who work
part-time to pay for the financial charges. Secondly, the governments are trying to
reduce the disparities among social classes, enabling us to escape from the period
when only elite could study in universities. Therefore, reducing universities frees
contributes to reaching equality for humanity.
On the other hand, some people state/agree that reducing fees in universities
resemble reducing the value of universities. As the result, universities, perhaps,
are becoming less competitive than they used to and the quality of universities
does not evolve intensively. Moreover, universities are not able to get a lot of
revenue and this definitely has some adverse effect/influence on their operations
in particular and economic development in general.
To sum up, the merits of reducing fees in universities outweigh keeping high
tuition fees. Therefore, the government should pour much more money into
education in the form of scholarships for students.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in general, in particular, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94612794613 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21313237041 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3471530275 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336788018969 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979154184712 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568909877589 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759763064109 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591826794598 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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