Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In
what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a
positive or negative development?
These days, the relationship people have with each other has been affected by advancements
in technology. There are several ways in which our relationships have been affected and I
believe that this has been negative.
Relationships have changed in the following ways. One of the major ways is that nowadays
people have more acquaintances and fewer close friends. For example, many people may
have hundreds and thousands of friends on social media websites like Facebook as it is easy
to connect through these websites. However, most of these people are not really close friends
at all. In addition, technology has led to less face-to-face interaction between people. Because
using social media sites has become an integral part of the lives of many people these days
and connecting with others has become so much easier as a result of such sites, most people
spend more time online chatting with their friends than actually meeting them face-to-face.
I believe that the above changes have been negative for the following reasons. In the first
place, people now feel lonelier as they spend more time with the computer rather than with
other human beings. Studies have shown that people need real face-to-face interaction if they
want to remain emotionally healthy. Therefore, the lack of such communication has made
many people become lonely and even depressed. Furthermore, many people who use
technology to communicate with others are gradually losing important social skills. It is very
common for people nowadays to know how to communicate and express themselves using
emoticons or other forms of expression that are common online. However, an unfortunate
consequence of all this is that people do not know how to express themselves properly using
their body language or tone of expression.
In conclusion, because of technology, people have fewer close friends and have less direct
contact with people. This development is negative as it is easier for people to feel lonely
because of this and they are becoming less adept in social situations. Given this situation, it is
recommended that people should seek to spend less time on electronic devices in order to
improve their relationships with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33707865169 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74385726355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6064164831 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38538040738 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123544897438 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534849026849 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100904428783 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646133898711 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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