Nowadays the way many people life has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
There is no doubt that the emergence of technology has revolutionized people living ways in many different ways. However, some people are convinced that the disadvantages of technology development overweight advantages I think, on the contrary it has brought enormous benefits.
Technology development, in particular, internet could be by far intended the most effective change which has offered an array of benefits for human beings. Some of overt advantaged of internet came into light just by advent of Covid-19 pandemic are distance learning and working. Thanks to technology development as well as internet, Covid-19 outbreak not only has yet many students and workers life disrupted, but also has rendered time saving and cost decreasing. Take a person working as an accountant as an example. he is more likely to diminish both time and cost needed for travelling to work and also, he could do his tasks remotely whenever he wants, whether at mornings or nights. Moreover, novel technologies, such as social media platforms have removed communication barriers and facilatied communicating. More, easier, cost-effective, and accessible communication systems stem from these advancements. Gone are the days when establishing communication with people who were in the far distance was too time-consuming and overwhelming labor. Whatsapp, Facebook and Instagram are some examples of renowned platforms.
However, some people believe technology development has been associated with some drawbacks, I agree that such our dependence on technology, and such is the enhancement of living quality, that positive effects are more tangible. First, technology provides people with more access to much more information sources. Second, it could be argued that it benefits disabled people who have to sit on a wheelchair thereby high-tech technologies enable them possess more desirable life and also facilitate mobility. Finally, technology derives the world towards sustainability which is for good of the future.
To sum up technology development is in a sense, an inevitable part of world evolution which has offered effective communicating and brought enormous flourishment.
- The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people to work in the future 84
- There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper Do you think it is a positive or negative development 67
- There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
- some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In this fast changing world distance learning and working have become one of the most challengeable issues Although I accepted the positive points of this trend I believe negative effects are more significant 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as to, i think, in particular, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68711656442 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2133420905 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6288118415 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22812316634 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722096840528 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718284874059 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157551071244 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846263472939 0.056905535591 149% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.