Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
When it comes to rubbish, as the amount of rubbish [is on the rise considerably], [it has become a highly controversial issue] and people have various opinions [in regards to this issue]. Some people believe that today’s environment is threatened by the factors such air pollution. However, the most concerning factor among environmental problems, is [an increase in] a daily amount of the rubbish being produced. I believe every government should be responsibile for this issue in order to decrease the amount of rubbish throughout the world.
To begin with, the amount of rubbish has increased as the world’s population is on the rise [ growing][ due to overpopulation]
It is inevitable factor that many different countries suffer from unhealthy consumerism that are more likely to create various kinds of wastes and people are likely to be exposed to the danger of environmental problems such air pollution as incineration is needed to eliminate the waste. Government have made solution to reduce garbage[waste] which is incineration, burying, composting , recycling and so on. I would suggest governments to educate the children in order to minimize the amount of rubbish by promoting the use of reusable bags effectively. In fact , utilizing reusable and green products are considered as a necessary step to prevent waste.
Last but not least, as the world became industrialized, there are many factories that pollute the environment. One of the ways that government could help is encouraging society to recycle through advertising or educating the public through environmental campaigns and to restrict production of plastic bottles. In addition , other actions that governments may undertake is to enhance the taxation system and increase the price of the products which are made of plastic as well as any products that could pollute the environment. This way, people are less likely to purchase plastic products and eventually we are able to preserve the environment.
To sum up, the world’s population have increased and most countries have been industrialized. Due to industralization, the amount of waste such as chemicals have been dramatically increased. I believe the government may help to protect the envionment through educating the public as well as young children to use reusable bags and encouraging the society to recycle effectievely through campaigns and increasing the tax on products that are not conisdered green or envieonmental friendly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21251803245 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.7654183384 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332800384338 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13131016255 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185710114556 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238722479179 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.342723964112 0.056905535591 602% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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