Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you things this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay topics:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you things this is happening?

What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It has commonly seen by different countries that people and people and organizations are producing enough useless things that actually should be stopped by government. In my opinion, for the sake of betterment of the country state can take number of initiative to reduce the quantity of rubbish items.

Numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that around the globe many industries are producing rubbish items that actually possess the value just like garbage. As well as, these products has no contribution to outweigh the economy of the country for instance, different toys of children, unhealthy sweets and candies, junk foods and others which is not suitable especially for children health. Furthermore, many adepts assert that owing to widely spread of rubbish food items people have become addicted to eat out side instead of home. Many intellectual people are concerned that due to less care and less indulgent of the government it has been spread across the world which has number of adverse consequences. In addition, survey depicts that mostly countries do not conduct any research before producing any items especially in third world countries wherein tendency of research is comparatively less than 1st world countries.

Furthermore, in order to minimize the amount of rubbish items government should implement sanctions on those industries that make products without any research. Alongside, to streamline the better economy government should spread the awareness of production work process nationwide especially among investors and business men where they can understand pros and cons of business process that actually will be worthwhile for outweighing the economy of the country.

All in all, it is the responsibility of government to look an eye on all activities which is being done within the country whether it’s relevant with producing rubbish items or something else. More to add, government should remove all those products from country that is less suitable for people and economy.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'items'' or 'item's'?
Suggestion: items'; item's
...order to minimize the amount of rubbish items government should implement sanctions o...
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Line 13, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s less suitable for people and economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, look, so, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49367088608 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81459012314 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9404604182 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.818181818 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168017239155 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065206511642 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034197655308 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10433572691 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202804650728 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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