Some believe that is the responsibility of people to take care about the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that government need to tackle all environmental issues, while rest of the people says that it is the responsibility of every individual who lives in society. I, however, agree that is to be controlled through the government instead of put responsibility on society's shoulder.
This essay will define the both side views in between government and society that eventually would evident the responsibility between two of them. Many adepts assert that is people are more engaged in their friends, family and work as compare to past that shows busy life of their daily routine which creates obstacles to being a part of the society. Along with this, most of the people raise the question that people are paying taxes to the government to spend money on those things which could be worthwhile for society as well as country. However, small number of people believes that the government has no power to force people to work as volunteer except their wish.
Furthermore, it is the responsibility of government to provide better environment to protect citizens from various diseases that could be more harmful for their lives, as well as government should open several institute around the country to look an eye on environmental issues and enforce their employees to being anxious and active to resolve problems on regular basis. Further adds, government need to implement sanctions on those machineries and equipments which is being a part of ruining environment, alongside segregate the area of heavy machineries in case of urgency.
To sum up, government should be focused on environmental issues on a top priority. Although, it is also a concern of the society to consider and protect for the sake of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10104529617 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85675190663 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2662762625 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.4 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213698603507 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886599486714 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625762670092 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137506521633 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481706058167 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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